The Smell is Under Control!!!
I learned something very important from my agent in the beginning. Always use three out of the five senses in each scene. Hear, touch, see, taste and the one that almost put me down for the count. SMELL. Now I know what you’re thinking. How hard can it be to describe a smell?
Well that’s what I thought. Until I started trying to do, what my agent wanted. You have to let the reader now the smell without let them know by: Here smell these flowers under your nose. No, it has to be subtle. I turned to the internet for some assistance. Ex one, It smells like. Is a good way to start. Ex two, It smells of. And last, I took in the scent. Now there a ton of ways to do this. This is just the basic for starting.
You can also camouflage a smell with the words. Aroma and fragrance. But it is not an easy art to learn. All the other senses for me were easy. I hope this open your sinus. ; )
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I've got a big thing about the scent of lilies in "Something Wicked." I'm starting to run out of new ways to describe them ... heady, sickly, over-powering ... I'm developing an allergy to them just writing about them.
I finished revising the smell problem yesterday. I was dreading it. But after I made myself sit down and do it. It became a game of words.
I think men are just smellier than women, S ;)
Naomi- I totally agree with that!
S- I got ya.
I need to work on this. At this rate, I'm going to be revising with a checklist in order to have it in my WIP.
Sela Carsen recently posted about this, I think.
May after you know what you are looking for you just automatically fix it.
Lol, S, your PG 13 scent made me choke on an olive. In a good way.
Hmm. I don't know if I've mentioned smell much. There is a scene after a character's been in the sewers ... =P
I'll bear it in mind for the future, thanks!
The wind blew across the lawn, bearing the aroma of freshly mown hay and sun-warmed earth...
He nuzzled her neck. The light fragrance of jasmine perfume and her delicious body chemistry teased his senses...
Faith that was beautiful.
Charlie, I always used the senses in my writing. I just had to change the wording.
The senses provide the most vivid imagery in prose.
Zinna, I so agree with that.
Thanks S.
A long time ago, I had a teacher who believed that smell is the most overlooked sensation in writing. He said that if done well smells trigger memories more effectively than any other sense. In one of his books he described the scent of a guy standing next to someone on a line by saying that his underarms smelled like coffee grounds. I got the picture immediately.
Smells are probably the sense that gets me the most, too. And I know I need to look at it... but then I don't do it. Or I temporarily forget. I think I'll have to do an edit pass purely for the senses.
I've been watching my wording. And I think I'm getting a lot better.
I thought about my own work and am pleased to say I include smells in mine.
One less thing to think about doing while writing!
:o)
At my best guess I have about 5 more chapters and the book is done.
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