September 19, 2006

The Smell is Under Control!!!

I learned something very important from my agent in the beginning. Always use three out of the five senses in each scene. Hear, touch, see, taste and the one that almost put me down for the count. SMELL. Now I know what you’re thinking. How hard can it be to describe a smell?

Well that’s what I thought. Until I started trying to do, what my agent wanted. You have to let the reader now the smell without let them know by: Here smell these flowers under your nose. No, it has to be subtle. I turned to the internet for some assistance. Ex one, It smells like. Is a good way to start. Ex two, It smells of. And last, I took in the scent. Now there a ton of ways to do this. This is just the basic for starting.

You can also camouflage a smell with the words. Aroma and fragrance. But it is not an easy art to learn. All the other senses for me were easy. I hope this open your sinus. ; )

19 Comments:

At September 20, 2006 5:08 AM , Blogger Naomi said...

I've got a big thing about the scent of lilies in "Something Wicked." I'm starting to run out of new ways to describe them ... heady, sickly, over-powering ... I'm developing an allergy to them just writing about them.

 
At September 20, 2006 10:56 AM , Blogger LA Burton said...

I finished revising the smell problem yesterday. I was dreading it. But after I made myself sit down and do it. It became a game of words.

 
At September 20, 2006 2:05 PM , Blogger Naomi said...

I think men are just smellier than women, S ;)

 
At September 20, 2006 2:35 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

Naomi- I totally agree with that!

 
At September 21, 2006 12:17 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

S- I got ya.

 
At September 21, 2006 3:51 PM , Anonymous Anonymous said...

I need to work on this. At this rate, I'm going to be revising with a checklist in order to have it in my WIP.

Sela Carsen recently posted about this, I think.

 
At September 21, 2006 4:27 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

May after you know what you are looking for you just automatically fix it.

 
At September 22, 2006 9:11 AM , Blogger Naomi said...

Lol, S, your PG 13 scent made me choke on an olive. In a good way.

 
At September 22, 2006 12:36 PM , Blogger Charlie said...

Hmm. I don't know if I've mentioned smell much. There is a scene after a character's been in the sewers ... =P

I'll bear it in mind for the future, thanks!

 
At September 22, 2006 1:02 PM , Blogger Faith Bicknell said...

The wind blew across the lawn, bearing the aroma of freshly mown hay and sun-warmed earth...

He nuzzled her neck. The light fragrance of jasmine perfume and her delicious body chemistry teased his senses...

 
At September 22, 2006 2:14 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

Faith that was beautiful.

Charlie, I always used the senses in my writing. I just had to change the wording.

 
At September 25, 2006 4:47 PM , Blogger Zinnia said...

The senses provide the most vivid imagery in prose.

 
At September 25, 2006 10:27 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

Zinna, I so agree with that.

 
At September 26, 2006 1:24 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

Thanks S.

 
At September 26, 2006 3:09 PM , Blogger Cyberoutlaw said...

A long time ago, I had a teacher who believed that smell is the most overlooked sensation in writing. He said that if done well smells trigger memories more effectively than any other sense. In one of his books he described the scent of a guy standing next to someone on a line by saying that his underarms smelled like coffee grounds. I got the picture immediately.

 
At September 26, 2006 3:31 PM , Blogger Nicole said...

Smells are probably the sense that gets me the most, too. And I know I need to look at it... but then I don't do it. Or I temporarily forget. I think I'll have to do an edit pass purely for the senses.

 
At September 27, 2006 1:54 PM , Blogger LA Burton said...

I've been watching my wording. And I think I'm getting a lot better.

 
At September 29, 2006 9:36 AM , Blogger Emmy Ellis said...

I thought about my own work and am pleased to say I include smells in mine.

One less thing to think about doing while writing!

:o)

 
At September 30, 2006 12:19 AM , Blogger LA Burton said...

At my best guess I have about 5 more chapters and the book is done.

 

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